Saturday, November 3, 2012

Codename Eagle Chick Logline

Okay, I've gotten a bit of feedback on the logline for Codename Eagle Chick and have revised it to focus on Caleb Gallagher, so here it is:

Caleb Gallagher is the President’s son. He’s also on the run with a Secret Service agent; a college friend who is a recently-tortured CIA recruit who can’t remember the last twenty-four hours; her overly-suave CIA associate; and a lesbian, Irish-coffee loving tech guru who’s their connection with the enigmatic intelligence powerhouse named Luthor. Together, they have to find “the faction” that wants him dead and stop their plans to profit from a potential world war.

I'm trying to get this in time for MSFV's Baker's Dozen submissions on Tuesday.

What do you think? Have I finally got it? 

Tuesday, October 30, 2012

Return from a long, refreshing hiatus

So you may or may not have noticed that I took a few months off. From the blog, at any rate. I had a job over the summer and decided to get a good academic start to this school year, so I've laid off the blogging portion of my existence and focused on writing, school, and reading. It wasn't altogether unpleasant, either. Just different.

Anyway, I thought I'd pop in and let you know that I'm not, in fact, dead, and that neither is this blog. In fact, I've made a lot of progress on Codename Eagle Chick and am preparing to enter MSFV's Baker's Dozen contest next week! Exciting stuff.

For the contest, I will submit the log line:
When a Secret Service agent tracks down the president’s missing son, he finds him in hiding with a battered CIA recruit, an overly-suave CIA operative, and a lesbian, Irish coffee-loving tech guru who’s their only connection with the enigmatic intelligence powerhouse named Luthor. Together, they have to find “the faction” that wants the president’s son dead and stop their plan to profit from a potential world war with the U.S. and China at its center. (75 words)
I'll also submit the first 250 words:
“Not the best wake up I’ve ever had,” I thought to myself as I fidgeted against the rope binding my hands. And then I remembered a morning in Istanbul that was actually very similar and shook my head. Gavin would be ashamed; my memory was off.

But that had been a four-star hotel room with a very pleasant Turk, whereas now I was in a dim room, naked, standing on tiptoes, and suspended by my wrists from the ceiling above. I stayed still, breathed steadily, ignored the goosebumps that glanced over my skin, and listened. No shoes tapped, no voices sighed, no hands fidgeted: nothing made a sound. I was alone. I let out a sigh of relief and started the process of getting the hell out of there.

My eyes refused to adjust to the blackness. I put my weight on one toe and stretched out my other leg, feeling around for something. Finally, my ankle struck something soft, something that moved. With more tentative examination as I balanced on a sore toe, I found it was a stray swivel chair. It would be tricky for what I had in mind, but I could manage it.

I stretched my body to hook the chair and bring it closer. I winced; my abdomen was sore, injured somehow.

I didn’t remember any of this. Was it a training exercise? I’d heard about intense field exercises, and I’d been through some myself, but this . . . was it torture endurance training, maybe?
Yes, I know, it's 251 words. Shh! Don't tell. Feel free to let me know what you think in the comments. All critique is welcome, as always.

So what's new with you guys? How was your writing summer? Have you also had to make changes recently as regards your lifestyle to make room for writing?

Friday, June 15, 2012

Tuesday, June 12, 2012

A Random Note on Information Usage

It's really creepy when you take the time and really watch your blog stats/audience with an eagle's eye. I check this blog's stats one minute, and five minutes later I checked again. I had one view, and the numbers on the various data told me that it's a German using a Windows machine running Firefox.

That's the power of tracking data.

It's really useful, say, once you're published and actually looking at what your potential market, but still . . .

Scared yet?

Sunday, June 10, 2012

And the Eagle is Flying!

I'm late to start Camp Nanowrimo (eight days late, to be precise) so I've got a lot of words to make up, but I'm happy to report that by the end of Day Nine, my first day of writing, I've ended up with a starting word count of . . .

[insert drumroll]

5,500 words!

[And the crowd goes wild . . . not. A girl can dream, eh?]

Still a long way to go, of course, but definitely not a shabby start, either.

Are you doing Camp Nanowrimo? If so, how behind/on target/ahead are you?

***EDIT: For those of you who don't know about (Camp) Nanowrimo, you can check out the websites for more info: Camp Nanowrimo & Nanowrimo.

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I also changed the blog layout to something a bit more festive--what do you think?