Okay, I've gotten a bit of feedback on the logline for Codename Eagle Chick and have revised it to focus on Caleb Gallagher, so here it is:
Caleb Gallagher is the President’s son. He’s also on the run with a Secret Service agent; a college friend who is a recently-tortured CIA recruit who can’t remember the last twenty-four hours; her overly-suave CIA associate; and a lesbian, Irish-coffee loving tech guru who’s their connection with the enigmatic intelligence powerhouse named Luthor. Together, they have to find “the faction” that wants him dead and stop their plans to profit from a potential world war.
I'm trying to get this in time for MSFV's Baker's Dozen submissions on Tuesday.
What do you think? Have I finally got it?
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